Friday, 18 May 2007

Creative Writing in Year 3

This week saw 3B using a book called 'Earthwarp' to do some wonderful writing. After reading the first chaper, the pupils had to imagine the kind of creature that may have come out of a spaceship! There were many fantastic pictures drawn, showing vivid details.
"I have never such brilliant and imaginative creatures," Miss Painter exclaimed.
This gave Mrs Bell the idea of putting them on display. Before the end of the week, the pictures were enlarged, mounted artistically by Miss Painter and put on a board for everyone to enjoy. Thank you, Miss Painter.
After drawing the pictures, the children wrote character studies, a newspaper report and a detailed description of the creature that Jenny and Amina had seen in the book. Luckily we have this story on video and every Friday, after maths we watch a little bit. Luke Gardner was so inspired he wanted to finish his writing in his own time.

In the role of a newspaper reporter, this is what he wrote,

"Yesterday night, I was at the beach fishing. Suddenly I saw a lazer shoot right up to the sky and it went red. I ran up to the top of the beach where the steps are. I peeped back and saw a shadow of an alien. I was shocked!!!
It had three eyes on green, wobbly bits. He had teeth like sharks. He had foru long, green arms and five legs. He had a glass helmet. He slithered along the steps. I ran to my house and went to bed. THEN I looked at my curtain and saw ANOTHER alien!"
Has anyone else seen any?


By Luke Gardner, reporting for W.S.P.S

11 comments:

Anonymous said...

On earth warp yestday we had to dicribe ollie i was working with hope it was really fun



from

maya

Anonymous said...

It was fun working with you maya as well. I described Ollie with 13 sentances.

from

Hope

Anonymous said...

I liked writing about Ollie. It was relly fun!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


from ADAM KENT

Anonymous said...

when we had to draw a creature from out of space my creature had 4 eyes and it had a little baby with it.
my creature looked rally funny but i rally enjoyed drawing it and corling it in.

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maya


Again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Anonymous said...

I liked using our imagineations to draw Ollie the space monster. My alien had four eyes, two ears, spotty body, fire & ice hair. I loved discribing Ollie I worked on my own.

From Suman
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Anonymous said...

On the display in our middle area my creature is on display.
And it is half on the competer my alien looks really funny and the baby looks really cute.





from

maya



again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Anonymous said...

i think luke's pitcher is good i think its funny i helpt hi0m to spell ick eye itis funny really good i think it really funny and good. it ded funny a spelshy the egg



from toby.

Anonymous said...

I loved making the monsters i wished i could of made two. One for me and one for mrs bell. LOVE FROM Daryl and Brandon.

Anonymous said...

I loved making the monsters i wished i could of made two. One for me and one for mrs bell. LOVE FROM Daryl and Brandon.

Anonymous said...

I like drawing aliens.










from Matthew salt

Anonymous said...

I have just read Luke's story on your blog and thought it was brilliant. Well done Luke. I am really pleased that all of 3B enjoy creative writing, because I know that Mrs Bell loves teaching it.
from Mrs Gregson